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moe williams's avatar

"As they were falling asleep, he wanted to kiss her head, but she had a red light mask on." I cackled

allie wisniewski's avatar

this, to me, includes a tastefully ideal smattering of "contemporary young person society" references

ella jade's avatar

I LOVed this!!!! YES!!! more fiction!’n

audrey <3's avatar

GAG!!!!!!!!! this was really really good. Etsy witch curse was cherry on top of the endlessly self actualizing optimization culture other people’s needs are my burdens thing

Sade's avatar

This was such an amazing read!! Please post more fiction!! The etsy witch curse topped it for me !!

Sodak's avatar

I confess, don’t understand it all (old guy here). But it was great, Eliza. You’re kind of talented (<big ol’ understatement).

bella's avatar

i wish it was longerrr. luv u eliza <3

Peter's avatar

That was lovely to read, thank you.

molly's avatar

this felt like the start of a book i would LOVE to read

ally by eve's avatar

so good wtf (i never comment on substack)

Misha Koroteev's avatar

Read it in one gulp, without going up for air

Ferris's avatar

and where is the full book?